"Some nice shots and good use of people but it feels like it needs to say more and work harder for our attention. Some of the dialogue stutters a bit and really should have been rerecorded. The script should have found more examples of what people do – what information NTU requires and the benefits of membership etc.
Almost there but needs a bit more attention to detail to impress rather than just tick the boxes??"
Phil Nodding
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