Friday, 4 November 2011

Alumni Project



"Some nice shots and good use of people but it feels like it needs to say more and work harder for our attention. Some of the dialogue stutters a bit and really should have been rerecorded. The script should have found more examples of what people do – what information NTU requires and the benefits of membership etc.

Almost there but needs a bit more attention to detail to impress rather than just tick the boxes??"

Phil Nodding

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